Sunday, April 25, 2010

Last journal

well, here comes the last journal...Joy asked us to write about what we learned this semester. Ok, now let's begin.

The first is ...I make lots of new friends! I put it first because I think it is the most important. Friends are always the most important.

We have been learning writing academic paper for almost an entire semester. we learned what thesis statement and topic sentence are and how to write them. We learned the structure of an essay. Also, we studied about citation, which is really important and can avoid plagiarism. We discussed about the way of using commas and run-ons and conjunctions, on which I made lots of mistakes.

We also studied about how to make a good presentation.

Well, I predicted that this journal would be short and now it come true. Hah...Congratulations to Joy! UCLA is a really really nice school and I wish I could study there...hah It will be a pity not see you in campus and say "hi" to you next semester. I will miss you...I promise.

Then...Brooke...I don't know how to comfort you. I know everything we said will not help you to get out of the hardness, but I still want to tell you that I feel sorry. I know you are strong in your heart and I hope you will get better soon. Your bad will not want to see you unhappy right?

All in all, I feel lucky to meet you guys this semester. The time spent with you will become a really happy memory that I will never forget.

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